Sunday, August 17, 2008

composition

Orientation
One scorching afternoon , Jane and her brother , John,were on their way home , after school . Just as they were walking past a block of HDB flat , they heard a noise .

Complication
They looked everywhere , left and right , up and down , when suddenly , they saw it ! There were two boys in a flat , throwing down eggs at them . Jane was being hit by an egg and was very furious . John had an egg struck on his school uniform .

Resolution
Jane and John was so furious that they went to the nearby neighbourhood police station to make a police report. Afterthey had told the police officer what had happened, they brought him to exact place where it happened. They also showed him which flat the two boys were living in.

Coda
When they went up to the flat, they were shocked to see Jane and John, bringing a police officer with them. The two boys apologised to them profusely and had promised not to do such a thing again.

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